Monday, 10 February 2014

PITCH - Feedback and Evaluation

Evaluation

Positives:

Attractive - I used a red, black and blue theme as I believed it would appeal to the viewers eye and how it would also hold their attention.

Clear - The prezzi is not difficult to understand. It is not a complex presentation and so made it easy to present to our audience. 

Direct - It is straight to the point. The necessary information about our opening sequence is included giving a clear direction to who and what we were planning to film.

Negatives: 

Copyright - The track "Abel Miller - Pound Cake Remix" was not uploaded to YouTube for anyone to use for free. Even though this particular artist is mutual friends which somebody I know very well, I had not yet had the chance to ask permission to use this sound. 

Storyboard - Pictures for our storyboard were taken but they had not yet been put together in time for the delivery of the pitch. 

Feedback 

From: Mary Berrisford 

The prezzi was found to be appealing and the concept for our film was accepted, however the lack of detail (mainly through the absence of a storyboard) put the completion and accuracy of our film in question. 

We were given the "go ahead" for our film but we were told that if as a group we believe that there is a chance we would not complete our film accurately or on time, it would be best to change our idea and film our opening sequence on campus. 

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